I can't critique worth crap but the only thing that really seems off in this is the way her hand rests on the wall... like, I don't know why but it doesn't feel like it's touching the wall, just in front of it. I took a reference picture and I hope it helps because I'm not very good at art without reference (very heavy reference) so it's the only way I can illustrate what I think it should look like.
You're absolutely right, it does look a bit off, hahaha. Still working on making characters interacting with backgrounds look good. :I It's also really cool, to me, that you went out of your way to make a reference pic! <3 Seeing a realistic portrayal of my awkward character posing is pretty interesting. Cheers mate!
...I should really be using reference more often. It gets pretty ridiculous when I try to draw a hand and can't get it right and... There are two hands right in front of me. /saves awesome reference pic to his secret stash
i will model for you when ever ;D I understand how tricky it must be if you're like "I WANT HER TO DO THIS. BUT I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT THAT LOOKS LIKE ANYMORE, NOW THAT I WANT TO DRAW IT." feel free to use it if you want, I'm okay with being a reference
So pretty!~ I love love LOVE the coloring, and the sense of atmosphere that's going on here. It's so beautiful! It may have taken awhile but I think I speak for everyone when I say it was well worth the wait! Best of luck in school, I hope it isn't too stressful
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